This is a Collaborative of 3 students from London College of Communication. The purpose of this blog is share our research and ideas in between out meeting.
i'm generally not to sure about the drop caps you are using. also your text needs more leading - what is the typesize/leading you are currently using? although much better the graphic elements/lines/shapes are still overpowering a little ... reduce them more. you know the dots are used on the cover and it feels like the rules are taking over from the dots on those pages which I believe is not quite what you want. The first page is so far the most successful one, the one with the drawings I think needs still the most tweaking. also don't forget to print out and see how those pages work in succession. if you want to break up those big blocks of text try emphasizing words by using another colour or using a different typesize or using a dot or or ...
What to you think BSY????? Feed back Please.
ReplyDeletePlease note some images still need to be put into Monotone.
i'm generally not to sure about the drop caps you are using. also your text needs more leading - what is the typesize/leading you are currently using?
ReplyDeletealthough much better the graphic elements/lines/shapes are still overpowering a little ... reduce them more. you know the dots are used on the cover and it feels like the rules are taking over from the dots on those pages which I believe is not quite what you want.
The first page is so far the most successful one, the one with the drawings I think needs still the most tweaking. also don't forget to print out and see how those pages work in succession.
if you want to break up those big blocks of text try emphasizing words by using another colour or using a different typesize or using a dot or or ...
what about all o's become a dot?